Wednesday, March 16, 2016
Elevator Pitch No. 3 Week 10
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xKWBTaShStQ&feature=youtu.be
After reflecting on the feedback I got from the last two elevator pitches I realized to just go with the flow and not try and right everything down and go from the heart and nail it. What I have changed in this pitch is that I did not really know exactly what I was going to say but one thing came after the next and it all segwayed pretty nicely. I did not have any silly comments on my last two posts just informative answers from my peers helping me or saying I did a good job.
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Great post Keith! I like how you made it a point to go with the flow rather than writing everything down. I've realized that when someone writes everything down, it seems very unnatural and fake, which most people seem to dislike. I surprisingly seem to do a better job when I just take things for what they are and go with it, because when following a script, I freak out when I mess up and then have no clue what direction to head in after. I would send you my post but I did not complete this in time. Awesome job on your video, and keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteHey Keith! I liked how you presented all the advantages someone can have when using your product/service. You are clear on makes your company different from others. Good job! The only thing that would help a little more is maybe have a model/design of what your company is selling to others. This is my elevator pitch: http://ent303uf.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no3.html
ReplyDeleteYou have a great idea and could serve your market of customers pretty well if executed correctly. Your pitch was great and I enjoyed how you emphasized what would set you apart from your competitors in the field which is important. Your pronunciation is pretty spot on but if I could give any criticism I would just say work on how many pauses you have in your pitch. Besides that I think the idea is good and your pitch went well. You should check out my pitch for a restaurant!
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Hi Keith! I think you did a good job in your pitch, you seem personable and have confidence which are great traits for an entrepreneur! It's great that you were able to compare your company to others and explain how your business is better and more efficient than other companies in the industry. Good job, check out my post of you get the chance http://jenniecarmody.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
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ReplyDeleteGreat job with your pitch, it was natural and to the point. Right from the start I knew what your company was about, and I didnt feel like you were beating around the bush. I feel like any possible investor you may come across will consider helping you out, because it seems genuine. Keep up the good work, man!